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song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:13 am
by Heather
still haven't gotten word about the contest, but I thought I'd share

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a4Mg_JqfWWE

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 5:19 am
by iemnaiz
i like the song, but i couldn't hear what you're singing

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 11:43 am
by Shiv
really good :2cool4u:

i liked the chorus :winkwink:

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:53 pm
by the perfect li e
Yeah you can't really hear the singing too much but otherwise awsome! :cool:

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:57 pm
by Heather
here are the lyrics, I need something better than a digital camera to record with

I watched the static on the tv all day
theres nothing better on to watch anyway
no need to pick up the telephone
theres nothing to hear but the sound of a dial tone

I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list to hang with the cool kids
and I've tried so hard to gossip all my life
but I soon found out its really not that right

theres nothing in the fridge to eat
can't think of anything to do but sleep
wrinkled up paper laying on the floor
from trying to write this song the night before

I tried to fit in, but I could not begin
there was a waiting list
to make the most of it
I've tried all my life to be dignified
but i found out to late its all just so fake

I don't wanna be part of this conformity
I don't wanna be part of the majority
I don't wanna be part of this reality
I don't wanna be anything, anything but me

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:02 pm
by samueeL
I love your melodies

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:04 pm
by Billy41
It sounds awesome, youre a good guitarplayer and singer! Keep it up

Dunno if im late (guess so) but your new sig looks sweetie :wordyo:

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:26 pm
by Heather
thanks everyone! appreciate it

billy, not to late, just made it a few days ago, thanks a bunch!

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:33 pm
by WillySpleen
ya gr8 song and sig

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 10:21 pm
by Sara
wow you've got amazing talent! i loved the chorus and guitar solo thingy :smile:
great keep it up ^^
lol yea and awesome sig xD

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 12:06 am
by Heather
thanks!! glad you guys dig it..I'm working on a cover of "count your last blessings" so i'll post that soon. I just uploaded this, just messin around

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cvli9NbOBA

and another song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8Li-bZw3_k

oh also thanks for the comments on my sig!!

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 2:46 am
by *Banned*t-j
Super gay.

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 2:54 am
by Shiv
t-j wrote:Super gay.
wow dont be a bitch....noob

criticize it with constructive comments or say its good

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:08 am
by *Banned*t-j
hardcoresum41fan wrote:
t-j wrote:Super gay.
wow dont be a bitch....noob

criticize it with constructive comments or say its good

Make it less gay.

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:54 am
by Heather
hardcoresum41fan wrote:
t-j wrote:Super gay.
wow dont be a bitch....noob

criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
thanks for having my back, seems like hes gone in a week so i'll just deal with it.

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 11:17 am
by Shiv
fenderrocks wrote:
hardcoresum41fan wrote:
t-j wrote:Super gay.
wow dont be a bitch....noob

criticize it with constructive comments or say its good
thanks for having my back, seems like hes gone in a week so i'll just deal with it.
yea i doubt that. he seems to be good friends with nic.... :headbanger:

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 7:36 pm
by Madjid
t-j wrote:Super gay.
Another asshole with a PD mentality, this is exactly what TNS needs now.
You're not funny, you're just making yourself less liked.

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:03 pm
by ReemFTW
t-j wrote:Super gay.
Man, wtf?
I'm not surprised you got banned from PD.
don't go around criticizing people when you can't do or work as hard as them.
AND you just came here! you don't even KNOW the people, yet you insult them. :/
jeez.

anyway Heather, you're a really talented and awesome guitar player and songwriter!!
you're pretty good at singing too =P your songs are really catchy =P

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:08 pm
by Heather
^^ thanks Reem I really appreciate it!

Re: song i wrote for a contest

Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2008 9:44 pm
by Madjid
GreenReem41 wrote:
t-j wrote:Super gay.
Man, wtf?
I'm not surprised you got banned from PD.
don't go around criticizing people when you can't do or work as hard as them.
AND you just came here! you don't even KNOW the people, yet you insult them. :/
jeez.

anyway Heather, you're a really talented and awesome guitar player and songwriter!!
you're pretty good at singing too =P your songs are really catchy =P
You forgot to add: AND NEWBIE'S N00B ZOMG !!!!!
I pwn all of you by chosing the best member evah as a n00b.
PS: t-j is banned for this board, noone will miss him, so just try not to mention his name again, so that he'll just die scared and alone.