Monica

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Ericuda
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Monica

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Hey, this is a song I wrote for my girl to tell her what she means to me. I feel bad for stealing some of the lyrics from Sum 41 songs, but I'm just not that good at this type of thing. My song is called 'Monica', and just so you don't get confused, the words change every chorus. (Please comment...)

Monica

I used to tell myself we were just friends,
But now I’ve come to my decision and this is how it ends.
To understand it takes a while,
All that time spent in denial.
It’s so confusing that I just can’t comprehend.

Every time I see you smile, it overflows my heart.
Will you help me mend it, or just tear it all apart?
Can you feel the same affection?
Do you look the same direction?
Your stunning beauty always gives my eyes a start.

I guess it’s now or never.
I would stand by you forever.
So full of trepidation,
My only destination.
I’d let my heart explode for us to be together.

You’re so animated; you’re my one single desire.
Some might call it strangeness, but it’s hard not to admire.
There’s not a competition,
There is no contradiction.
Every time I see you, I know this won’t soon retire.

If I seem to be intense,
That’s because this feeling is immense.
I don’t attempt to bribe you.
It’s so hard to describe you.
Yet, here I am trying hard as if the words exist.

Don’t blame it on yourself,
Sometimes, my mind is slower than my mouth.
I’m just so plain and filthy,
You seem to think you’re guilty
For every aspect of my whole entire life.

I’m at a loss of words; I find it hard to speak.
You walked into to my life and extinguished my disbelief.
Too many things to mention,
Beyond my mind’s extension
To find the words for what you’ve changed inside of me.

No matter where we land,
I won’t let go, ’cause this is where I stand.
I’ll fight my hesitation.
It is my obligation
To kill my anxiety and make you understand.

There’s nothing I won’t do,
It’s worth the pain if it keeps me close to you.
Now, it’s clear and I can feel
What I never thought was real.
Please know that all these words are true.
Please know that all these words are true.

I couldn’t live without you,
My life is all about you.
Please know that all these words are true.
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Re: Monica

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'Reads more like a poem than a song.
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Re: Monica

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This is how songs used to be written down. Songwriters become stupid, and so do followers. ;)
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