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here's a sample to a song i'm working on. not exactly sure yet, but this will probably end up being the bridge to it. what's anyone think....?

Automatic charismatic, why am I so dramatic?
Forget this shit, fuck it all.
I dont care, take it all.
I cant eat, I cant sleep, I cant breathe, I cant think.
Get back, watch out, I'm about to detonate!
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It's very good actually , i can't wait to read the rest.

BTW : the fist line is a lot similar to " Thanks For Nothing" by Sum 41 :

So jaded , frustrated , it's all so complicated.
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pretty good
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Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!

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^ ^ thank you both :smile:
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ghij353 wrote:Replete with nightworld of warcraft gold
elves, Orcs and dwarves, Worldworld of warcraft gold
of Warcraft is set in a fantasyworld of warcraft gold
world not unlike Tolkien's Lordworld of warcraft gold
Of The Rings.
what the hell does this have to do with my song sample???
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I have to say those are amazing lyrics
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Stevo32jr. wrote:I have to say those are amazing lyrics
thank you. read the finished version of that song lol it's called "Prodigal Son"
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hehe 'Fuck it all' nice, very punk! :D
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it´s ok...but the "I´m about to detonate" is a Sum 41 lyric....(Hooch)
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rubo41 wrote:it´s ok...but the "I´m about to detonate" is a Sum 41 lyric....(Hooch)
i realize that but i didnt steal it from them. and i guarantee they're not the first band to use that line in a song either.
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No , yeah, for sure.....I´m the main composser in my band, and sometimes this happens.....

It´s so easy to do something similar to another song...and more with lyrics.
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