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Stories

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 12:39 am
by Dan
My latest song. I just finished it. I'm not 100% satisfied, but it's half past midnight here, and i got a flash of inspriation and I had to write it down.

Seeing as my new band has a sort of Hawthorne Heights / Brand New kind of vibe, this fits quite well. Its quite upbeat, despite having whiny lyrics.

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I will wait for you
If you tell me to stay here
I will pray for you
awaiting answers to my ear
I'm Sorry for
All the things I never did
But I could never lie

I'm feeling paralyzed
With every inch that I was crawling
Look in my eyes
and tell me It was me who's stalling
Paint my demise
On the canvas black and white
It's not hard to see

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

I'm not the one who would
Save you from your second story
And even if I could
I wouldnt give you any glory
Your hazel glace
Stops me stalking in your tracks
Its a catastrophe

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

I'm incomplete
I'm incomplete
Theres a pain in me
And it wont go away
Just you wait and see
There is more to me
Some day I'll be free
because

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

Yes
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

Re: Stories

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 3:12 am
by xmarryxx
damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!

Re: Stories

Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:09 pm
by withchappedlips
xmarryxx wrote:damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!
The best lyrics come at night.
You care a lot less about what you write down, and it propels you to write things you normally wouldn't think of. Or at least that's what I think.

Re: Stories

Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:01 am
by tomhoppus
Kyle wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!
The best lyrics come at night.
You care a lot less about what you write down, and it propels you to write things you normally wouldn't think of. Or at least that's what I think.
Welcome The Night


ORLY?


But, good job on the song.

Re: Stories

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 8:44 pm
by samueeL
CHORUS ROX!

Re: Stories

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 10:23 pm
by Dan
This is the chorus i reused for 'For The Girl I'll Never Get'

Also, mods, can we get rid of this Cone Crusher message?