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Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:07 pm
by Dan
What is this
Is it true
What is happening to you
I know, I feel it also
Do you laugh
At the crime?
Do you sing it line by line
Can you tell me once if it is true

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Keep you head
Held up high
I dont want to see you cry
It gets me too emotional
Can you see
on tv?
Not what it is meant to be
The crime of an adultery

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Are you mine
I cant see
knowing now who you will be
I wanted what was best for you
Better now
Find me there
Wash away all my dispair
Come find me when you are ready

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to

Every time
It grows with time
Hours spent
finding you
running fast
but coming last
what am i to do?

Don't you want to go to the
Fire works down below
Its warming in my throat
It burns for you
Empty shell of a man
trying whatever he can
Sinning just for you
You told him to (him to)
you told him to (him to)
You told him to, you lied

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:32 pm
by Gibsum 41
seems pretty good

just to make sure, in your song fire works= hell, right?

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:34 pm
by Dan
Gibsum 41 wrote:fire works= hell, right?
Yes.

Also, I intended it to be two separate words.

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:37 pm
by Gibsum 41
oh, well nice reference :wink:

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:02 pm
by Peterr
Pretty good

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:15 pm
by wiggs1441
yesh

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:22 am
by Kano
i like nice job man

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 4:02 am
by Mr. Maker
nice, its kinda long but i dont know the music so its prolly super short

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 10:14 am
by Hentaiman
Yeah, its nice, although like that it seems kinda long, i dunno.

Re: Fire Works

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 9:56 pm
by Andy_Wiser
really nice!
Curious fact: I wrote a song called fire works too,but that's completely different ;-)