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this song that i wrote is about something that everyone goes through in life. its about when you have a great friend, and you like them more than just as a friend, but dont wanna confess to them because you're too afraid of ruining what you already have in your relationship with them. let me know what you think...

"Left Unsaid"

Verse 1
Nonstop fun when we're together
It makes me weak in the knees
And gives me a feeling of such happiness
that no one ever sees
I wish the days would last forever
and the nights would never end
No one understand, but it's true
You mean more to me than just a friend

Chorus
As much as it kills me, I'll leave these thoughts in my head
I wanna tell you how much you mean to me
But some things are better left unsaid

Verse 2
You make me feel a way, that I've never felt before
Let them say what they wanna say
They're nothing but jealous and immature
Sometimes I question if this feeling's real
'Cause it's something I never knew
I wish I had the courage to confess
the way that I feel about you

(Chorus)

Bridge
Never again, will you have to look, for someone that would care
Just turn around, 'cause I promise you, I will always be there
All my life there was something missing
And waiting for destiny was all I could do
But then my life was changed forever
I'll never forget the day that I met you

(Chorus)
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Freakin' awesome! i really liked it :D
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love it. really love it.

you got music for it too?
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Hentaiman wrote:Freakin' awesome! i really liked it :D
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haha thank you guys and girls very much! i really appreciate the compliments you guys always leave me! :D

and no ToMaTaN i dont have the music for it, everyone's been asking me though
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sprinks41 wrote:haha thank you guys and girls very much! i really appreciate the compliments you guys always leave me! :D

and no ToMaTaN i dont have the music for it, everyone's been asking me though
no worries mayte, it is lush though
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