So its been a long time since i wrote anything lyrically. I just came up with this, along with a slowish fastish tune for it.
Call me up one Saturday evening
The taste of Gin upon my breath
Telling Me You Don't care about me
How am i supposed to pay the rent
(musical part)
In this song you can find my feelings
In this song you can find my hate
All alone staring at the ceiling
Time goes by and now its too late
thats all i got so far, but im making it a short song so there wont be much more. if i don't crap this, soon i'll be posting the musical part too.
*waits for boos*
song i wrote
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Re: song i wrote
hey that's pretty good man.
there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.
DEFO post the music soon :D
there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.
DEFO post the music soon :D
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Re: song i wrote
ToMaTaN wrote:hey that's pretty good man.
there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.
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Re: song i wrote
thanks! :D
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Re: song i wrote
ToMaTaN wrote:hey that's pretty good man.
there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.
DEFO post the music soon :D
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Re: song i wrote
that is actually pretty damn good man. it flows fluently throughout the whole song
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Thats pretty good!
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