new song

Byzzy · Post by **Byzzy** » Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:36 am

this song is a song that i started writing like a year ago and it has the same chords that underclass hero has, it's so weird, cuz it has almost the same intro and chorus and verse..
whatever, these are the lyrics:

verse1:
don't really know
what you've ever got
is something
i'm trying to figure it out

i wanna clean up this mess
before it gets too late
you make believe
that i need to grow up

chorus:
you wanted to be friends with god and the devil
but in your way to hell you just lost what you ever got
and there's nothing there to change for what you've done before
i guess you'll realize what you wasted time ago

i haven't finished the song though, but i'm working on it

TheGuyWhoLikesToast · Post by **TheGuyWhoLikesToast** » Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:33 pm

wow these lyrics are i don't know awsome.
i wonder what's the song like :)

Hentaiman · Post by **Hentaiman** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:24 pm

Sounds good :)

The first verse will really fit into Underclass Hero's first verse :D
good job :)

Post by **Dylan** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:09 pm

thje first two lines of the first verse reming me of the opening line to Crazy Amanda Bunkface

Byzzy · Post by **Byzzy** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:23 pm

is kinda hard to finish it cuz i don't like that girl anymore lol.
but it sounds really cool though

Post by **Dylan** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:08 pm

well you could finish it like that. kinda like a mirrior poem thing. start of likeing her and then finishing off hateing her. kinda like figured you out by Nickelback.

Byzzy · Post by **Byzzy** » Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:04 am

mm, it'd be kinda short tough. I guess i'll have to finish it eventually lol