have you ever...?

Lithium · Post by **Lithium** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:01 pm

Have you ever love me?
feel the same I do for you
I don't think so because my feelings never could be reach
Have you ever cry for me?
Don't think so you were just telling lies about and never feel that way
But I just understand I was wrong so for that I'm alone

I loose you again I never knew this was true
I should open my eyes see all
And I now I was wrong they say it was true
But it couldn't be me without you.

You were the only one I love
Now i loose you forever
Don't wanna see me anyomore
No I'm alone
Without a partner or friend
Being dead is more meaningful

don't worry for me
I will be dead
for the time you remember me
And all those memories will die
In this lonely heart
that abandon me when you die

Zam · Post by **Zam** » Wed Aug 01, 2007 8:44 pm

You need to learn to use some proper grammar and IMO it seems a little childish, the lyrics.

benroy39 · Post by **benroy39** » Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:48 am

they're a little nice

samueeL · Post by **samueeL** » Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:06 pm

loved*

Byzzy · Post by **Byzzy** » Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:31 am

it sounds good to me

Phili · Post by **Phili** » Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:35 am

Has good potential, but it's a bit obvious that your grammar needs work.

Lithium · Post by **Lithium** » Fri Aug 03, 2007 6:46 am

Phili wrote:Has good potential, but it's a bit obvious that your grammar needs work.

yes I do suck on that

Me failed grammar for 2 years dont know why...

jk