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own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 3:36 pm
by Wo2LA Drummer
hello

what do you think of this song?
it'a the first own song ;)

thanks for listening

best regards

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 3:52 pm
by Mitchell
Aside from the fact that this is a massive With Me ripoff, it sounds pretty fucking good, almost too good.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:01 pm
by SickofEveryone
I didn't like. ANd I hope you never joined just to post that video..

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:24 pm
by Ardi41
haha like sum 41 :devious:

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:44 pm
by Wo2LA Drummer
okey it's a little bit too similar

if you hear only Sum41 each day, then can't come out one different :devious:

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 5:59 pm
by Gregorovich
Really good, but yeah honestly I have never heard one amateur song so similar to a another professional one.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:37 pm
by HugoDisasters
Gregorovich wrote:Really good, but yeah honestly I have never heard one amateur song so similar to a another professional one.
This. totally.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:28 pm
by Dylan
what everyone else said: massive rip off. i suggest you try harder next time, i mean the title is even a rip off. "without you" vs "with me". come on dude.

Wo2LA Drummer wrote:if you hear only Sum41 each day, then can't come out one different :devious:
are you serious? there is way better music out there than sum 41. listen to different types of music and maybe you'll come back with something original.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 4:54 am
by Resident Skumfuk
that sounded like a ripoff of With Me as covered by like Creed or some shit. You have a good voice, but as others have said, just find your own sound.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 4:59 am
by sumfan4
SickofEveryone wrote:I hope you never joined just to post that video..
Clearly did. We won't be seeing him around.

Re: own first song-like Sum41

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 4:24 am
by Jeremy Kill
It is really well done. Vocals are nice, overall quality is great, but it sounds too generic. If I were to turn on a soft rock radio station, this is the kind of song I'd expect to hear.

The song isn't unlistenable, it's just unoriginal.