Well, the full title of it is "The Days That Make Us (August Anthem pt.2)". I really liked that ambient kind of feel in the new Skumfuk, so I tried my hand at something similar with this song, wanting the intro to allude to the original August Anthem riff to give it that feeling of continuity.
I actually have lyrics written for this song. It didn't take me long to write at all, but I'm not sure if I'll post them yet. I kind of just wrote stuff down. I didn't take into account vocal melody or any sort of rhyme scheme.
Anyway, hope you enjoy.
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Re: The Days That Make Us (New Song)
You should really try to get some kind of bass sound in there aswell. Some guitar amps can emulate bass sounds very well, marshall amps for example. Otherwise great song.
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Great song man! It really had Skumfuk intro vibe. You should totally post lyrics too, interested to hear them, since the song is kinda dark!
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I actually listened to it twice in a row, it's really good man ! I FUCKING LIKE THE TUNE !
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Holy f*** Jeremy this one sounds AWESOME !!!! You HAVE to let me play with it for a mix !!!!
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Haha you really notice there has very much of Sum 41 in it, just through your voice.
Sounds great!
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Sounds great!
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Very nice!
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Re: The Days That Make Us (New Song)
i have a feeling that you didn't listen to it.HugoDisasters wrote:Haha you really notice there has very much of Sum 41 in it, just through your voice.
Sounds great!
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"why Dylan, what do you mean? of course i listened to it"
FALSE. there are no vocals so, no, i believe you didn't actually listen to it.
i did, and i have to say that it like it. though instrumentals like this bore me because its just power chords and obviously there will be a vocal melody over top that tells a story. but as for a basic song structure, it sounds like it would be fun to play and overall, very neat little base for a full song.
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I was thinking that too2712 wrote:i have a feeling that you didn't listen to it.HugoDisasters wrote:Haha you really notice there has very much of Sum 41 in it, just through your voice.
Sounds great!
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"why Dylan, what do you mean? of course i listened to it"
FALSE. there are no vocals so, no, i believe you didn't actually listen to it.
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Okay, here are the re-worked lyrics. I'm pretty sure none of it goes with the music except for maybe the chorus. The last chorus line is supposed to go with that slow part at the end. Also, be warned that it's probably pretty emo and doesn't really possess a positive outlook, but I must admit it felt damn good to write these words down... or "type them up," rather. My first lyrics I've ever written! History is being made here tonight!
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Really enjoyed those man. Now we're only missing vocal melody! ;)
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I did listen to it, as an asian and a fan of Jeremy Kill.Dr. Cliterus of Ponty wrote:I was thinking that too2712 wrote:i have a feeling that you didn't listen to it.HugoDisasters wrote:Haha you really notice there has very much of Sum 41 in it, just through your voice.
Sounds great!
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"why Dylan, what do you mean? of course i listened to it"
FALSE. there are no vocals so, no, i believe you didn't actually listen to it.
That must be me writing when i was tired, i meant it as if you sung through your instrument you would sing something like the lyrics of skumfuk. Don't think what i was thinking at that time really gone through my head really well
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