Unspoken (Feedback plz :])

[pakiraider]

The ink ran out of my pen
The last letters fading away
The last thoughts left unsaid
Left engraved in my head

Time passes us by
You barely notice
It drags on forever
In my head you’ve become a memory

Sitting on the ledge
Too many thoughts driving me to the edge
I’m desensitized, barely recognized the words I memorized,
I needed to say to you

I’m speechless
Feeling so useless
And I got to confess
I love you and I can’t take this
Anymore, anymore

The ink ran out of my pen
The last letters fading away
The last thoughts left unsaid
Left engraved in my head

These are the scars
In my head
Dented from an accident
As the rescuers try to recover
What was meant to remain from the wreckage
Before time runs out and it’s all over

Last chance, last stand
But I can’t
These words just ran
They ran away, away, away

The ink ran out of my pen
The last letters fading away
The last thoughts left unsaid
Left engraved in my head

I’ve got so much to say
But my voice is gone and the ink ran out
I guess it was meant to stay unsaid

The charade slowly fades
Away we drift
Currents carry us places
Where no one’s ever lived

My voice is gone
And the ink ran out
I guess these words weren’t meant
For me to say
As I fade into the darkness

[Wennis]

Kinda how im feeling atm,, very nice!

[silverdolphin]

Nice. I like it :)