just a little something i just scrambled together...
Before us, he fades, into, the night
No body knows, how hard it is
When you’re dead, inside, but still living
Why aren’t I dead?
I don’t wanna sleep tonight
I wanna give up this fight
I wanna see my self fall
I think I might just end it all
Look inside my eyes
See the pain that lies
Look inside my heart
It’s the blackest arc
Not beating for me so why would it for you
I don’t wanna sleep tonight
I wanna give up this fight
I wanna see my self fall
I think I might just end it all
Today, is the day, that it falls apart
And my hands, now they hold, that very last spark
Erase the dark, see the pain, watch it all flow to the brain
Dress the part, what’s my name? can’t go through this again
Erase the dark, see the pain, watch it all flow to the brain
Dress the part, what’s my name? can’t go through this again
This is my last sleep tonight
Looks like I’ve given up the fight
Go and watch me fall
This is me ending it all
So thanks for coming out.
new song - thanks for coming out
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
not joking, u r gay?
no problem anyway
no problem anyway
- Mitchell
- Staff Fluffer
- Posts: 4964
- Joined: Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:46 am
- First name: Mitchell
- Age: 24
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: MetalMilitant41
- PSN ID: blackhawk1105
- Instrument 1: Guitar
- Twitter: @MitchellK41
- Location: The Netherlands
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
This doesn't make sense at alldirk wrote:not joking, u r gay?
no problem anyway
- lisaNL
- Chuck
- Posts: 2185
- Joined: Sat Jul 10, 2010 11:25 am
- First name: Lisa
- Age: 17
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: guitar
- Instrument 2: the remote control
- Last.fm Username: lisaNL
- Location: Holland
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
I think he's referring to the title. Like coming out as in telling you're gay. xDblackhawk1105 wrote:This doesn't make sense at alldirk wrote:not joking, u r gay?
no problem anyway
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
it's funny,he posts a song here in hope to get some opinions and the only three people who were sedulous enough to comment on this had written a total bullshit comments .
I like the way the lyrics are written,it's kinda dark and that's just what I like ...
I like the way the lyrics are written,it's kinda dark and that's just what I like ...
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
- UltraKolby
- Hooch
- Posts: 412
- Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:50 am
- First name: Kolby
- Age: 17
- Gender: ♂
- Instrument 1: Guitar
- Instrument 2: Piano
- Location: America
- lisaNL
- Chuck
- Posts: 2185
- Joined: Sat Jul 10, 2010 11:25 am
- First name: Lisa
- Age: 17
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: guitar
- Instrument 2: the remote control
- Last.fm Username: lisaNL
- Location: Holland
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
FuckT is right, sorry for not giving you any feedback the first time. But about the song, I think it's good. It's dark but I like that :)
Last edited by lisaNL on Sun Mar 13, 2011 5:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
-
- Newbie
- Posts: 72
- Joined: Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:53 am
- First name: Zain
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- PSN ID: lostinstereo182
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
it's very good i like it!
- dbauer91
- Billy Spleen
- Posts: 339
- Joined: Mon Oct 18, 2010 2:52 am
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- Instrument 1: guitar
- Instrument 2: drums
- Instrument 3: keyboard
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
- PyroAMYac
- Bunkface
- Posts: 224
- Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:32 am
- First name: Amy
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: Piano
- Instrument 2: Drums
- Instrument 3: Guitar
- Last.fm Username: Mckredie
- Location: UK
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/dbauer91 wrote:to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
"I wish it was raining, 'cause I hate every beautiful day"
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
you probably wont like the new sums album then...PyroAMYac wrote:Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/dbauer91 wrote:to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
don't listen to him,if you wanna write pessimistic lyrics,do so,I like it ...I am very optimistic about myself and extremely pessimistic about the world and about other people...everyone likes something different,but look,MCR were writing their lyrics the same way as you did :PJDM13 wrote:you probably wont like the new sums album then...PyroAMYac wrote:Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/dbauer91 wrote:to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
- PyroAMYac
- Bunkface
- Posts: 224
- Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:32 am
- First name: Amy
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: Piano
- Instrument 2: Drums
- Instrument 3: Guitar
- Last.fm Username: Mckredie
- Location: UK
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
I know that it's gonna be darker and I have no problem with that, Blood In My Eyes sounds awesome for example, but I think they're very unlikely to ever suggest suicide - That's not the way they work and there's far too much energy in their songs for that theme.JDM13 wrote:you probably wont like the new sums album then...PyroAMYac wrote:Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/dbauer91 wrote:to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
"I wish it was raining, 'cause I hate every beautiful day"
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda deadPyroAMYac wrote:I know that it's gonna be darker and I have no problem with that, Blood In My Eyes sounds awesome for example, but I think they're very unlikely to ever suggest suicide - That's not the way they work and there's far too much energy in their songs for that theme.JDM13 wrote:you probably wont like the new sums album then...PyroAMYac wrote:Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/dbauer91 wrote:to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
- PyroAMYac
- Bunkface
- Posts: 224
- Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:32 am
- First name: Amy
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: Piano
- Instrument 2: Drums
- Instrument 3: Guitar
- Last.fm Username: Mckredie
- Location: UK
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...FuckT41182 wrote:oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead
"I wish it was raining, 'cause I hate every beautiful day"
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...PyroAMYac wrote:I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...FuckT41182 wrote:oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
- PyroAMYac
- Bunkface
- Posts: 224
- Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:32 am
- First name: Amy
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: Piano
- Instrument 2: Drums
- Instrument 3: Guitar
- Last.fm Username: Mckredie
- Location: UK
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
Correction: I said they have to much energy to drag it down by theming their SONGS about suicide.FuckT41182 wrote:you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...PyroAMYac wrote:I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...FuckT41182 wrote:oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead
"I wish it was raining, 'cause I hate every beautiful day"
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or badPyroAMYac wrote:Correction: I said they have to much energy to drag it down by theming their SONGS about suicide.FuckT41182 wrote:you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...PyroAMYac wrote:I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...FuckT41182 wrote:oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge
- PyroAMYac
- Bunkface
- Posts: 224
- Joined: Sun Mar 13, 2011 2:32 am
- First name: Amy
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♀
- Instrument 1: Piano
- Instrument 2: Drums
- Instrument 3: Guitar
- Last.fm Username: Mckredie
- Location: UK
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
First of all, since when is suicide cool, and secondly, I'm sorry, when you say "you young people" who the hell are you referring to?FuckT41182 wrote:suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or bad
"I wish it was raining, 'cause I hate every beautiful day"
- FuckT41182
- Resident Skumfuk
- Posts: 5234
- Joined: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:34 pm
- First name: Jacob(Jism)
- Age: 20
- Gender: ♂
- n00b: my dick
- Location: Slovakia
- Contact:
Re: new song - thanks for coming out
I don't care,give me a break for god's sake I don't give a shit what I write about ...and you are way too serious,you guys need to chill out , Stevo hates youPyroAMYac wrote:First of all, since when is suicide cool, and secondly, I'm sorry, when you say "you young people" who the hell are you referring to?FuckT41182 wrote:suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or bad
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge