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"Spaced"

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Hey. This song is called "Spaced". i wrote all of it except the drums. it's supposed to be, like, a psychedelic sort of twist. what do you think? oh and i know the drums are out of time a little at the end, but i couldn't do anything about it because i didn't record them.
the lyrics are pretty simple, but hard to hear because they're slightly phased, they're:

decensitized
realise
maybe then you could see there's more to me
Maybe we should be
together for the rest of our lives

i hate this feeling
i feel like screaming

if only we'd forseen,
the future that we could have been,
which is just a crumbled attempt left
and a disappointment to myself
who would of ever thought,
i would end up like this
me?
yeah, what's the point?
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Where you on acid when you wrote this?
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Nic wrote:Where you on acid when you wrote this?
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unfortunately, no. haha.
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hmmmmm...

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Radiohead
This is Mark Allen Hoppus. He likes long walks on the beach. This, this is travis barker. He likes to be read poetry just before sunset. And me, I like to stick small pieces of furniture up my butt.
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That drummer sucks ass! Who is he anyway? I'd like to shake my fist at that guy.
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LOL! oh yeahh, the drummer, fuck yeah, he's awesome. just some guy named brandon who kicks asssss at drums. :P

and radiohead? awesome, i've never actually properly listened to them though.
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just kinda reminds me of them ...
This is Mark Allen Hoppus. He likes long walks on the beach. This, this is travis barker. He likes to be read poetry just before sunset. And me, I like to stick small pieces of furniture up my butt.
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I spy on my dad while he is taking a shower just like everyone else
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
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ah, awesome.
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Wow, I dig it. It has a pretty sweet ambient feel to it
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this reminds me of I-dosing
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thanks!

and yeah haha, yeah i understand the i-doser thing.
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