Sup niggaz. Again i don't even know if this is the right forum. but this is what i normally do when record something regardless of how shit it is.
Anyway I made a cover of Polly by Nirvana and i'd really love some comments up on youtube but if you're too lazy that's finee just do whatever ;D
http://youtube.com/watch?v=J4ulQ35h64w
Polly cover
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Re: Polly cover
it was really good, except for the timing. it seemed uneven and choppy, but if you worked on that it would be perfect
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Re: Polly cover
Exactly my thoughts. Sounds awesome, just a bit off timing.mikey41 wrote:it was really good, except for the timing. it seemed uneven and choppy, but if you worked on that it would be perfect
Btw. if you edit your post and put just the video ID (J4ulQ35h64w) inbetween the [youtube] tags, the embed player should work.
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Re: Polly cover
I don't want to offer my criticism. But if i did, I'd say work on those vocals. Polly is very tough to do as a starter guitarist/vocalist.
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Re: Polly cover
done.Simon wrote:Exactly my thoughts. Sounds awesome, just a bit off timing.mikey41 wrote:it was really good, except for the timing. it seemed uneven and choppy, but if you worked on that it would be perfect
Btw. if you edit your post and put just the video ID (J4ulQ35h64w) inbetween the [youtube] tags, the embed player should work.
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Re: Polly cover
ok, i shall work on that. and thanks, i really did need to know how to get the embedded player to work lol.
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Re: Polly cover
Sounds like shit. Vocals are weak. Guitar tone is pretty nice though. Try recording with a metronome.
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Re: Polly cover
You call em' like ya see em'.Slither wrote:Sounds like shit. Vocals are weak. Guitar tone is pretty nice though. Try recording with a metronome.
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Re: Polly cover
i think the voice works for the song, the guitar just off
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