Neverending Story (Certifiable)

[sprinks41]

this is a song that's been in the making for months, maybe even longer. i finally finished it.

Intro
When it's all over
I can't help but laugh at it
This is my life
If you only knew the half of it

Verse 1 part 1
I must be a treasure
Because your only pleasure
is to watch me suffer
Your torture may fill me
But you'll never kill me
You'll only make me stronger

Verse 1 part 2
I know that you'r not real
And in this trail that I've bled
is nothing I could ever feel
so just get out of my head

Pre-Chorus
Your empty mind is possessed by paranoia (Just leave me be!)
Nothing you can do but feel it destroy ya (Don't fuck with me!)

Chorus
It's a neverending story
that drives me insane
It's a neverending story
that nobody can see
It's a neverending story
And it starts with pain
It's a neverending story
And it ends with me

Verse 1 part 1
Well thanks to you I can't think for myself
My body is in heaven but my mind is in hell
Sick to my stomach I fight to survive
When you're raped by pain you know you're alive
You feel like you can't go on and you wanna stop livin
No matter what happens you can't give in

Verse 2 part 2
I don't know what you are
I don't care what you're after
You push me way too far
You're the slave, I'm the master

Pre-Chorus
With all this debris in the way I can't see straight (Just leave me be!)
When it's all said and done will it be too late? (Don't fuck with me!)

(Chorus)

Outro
I've lost all sense of my pride
My heart beats dead inside
No matter how hard I've tried
All my fears have come to collide
Those around me have lied
I need a place to hide
And gather my thoughts inside
I may be afraid but I'll survive

[Simon]

I was never a fan of poetry but this sure reads like one hell of a song! When will there be something to listen to?

[FuckT41182]

I was never a fan of poetry but this sure reads like one hell of a song! When will there be something to listen to?

the lyrics are good ...you should post here music too :)

[sprinks41]

thank you both :) and no i dont have the music for it

[Jake-41]

In a Green Day kinda singing manor, i could make this song rock the TITS!

[Tyler.]

i like the lyrics, but you should try to write the musical part before you write lyrics. that way you have lyrics that will go with the song as opposed to fitting lyrics into a musical part, if you get what i mean. lol.

[Simon]

Yeah you should try that also, but whatever works for you best is the way to go. There are people writing beautiful lyrics over their songs as well as composing great melodies over pre-written lyrics. I prefer to have the music first and then think about what it means to me or what meaning I want to give it.