New Original

[Oli3L]

I got bored this weekend so I've recorded an original song.

I know that there are a few bad parts, and i know that the end went awful,. try to be nice though :|

[Madjid]

There are a few bad parts, and the end went awful.

[samueeL]

Well.. That sounded interesting.. And I kinda liked it :D

[Slither]

It's way to repetitive, annoying and boring. You weren't kidding when you said you were bored.
You obviously know how to play the guitar, I can hear that right away. But your writings skills are bad.

Try to write some songs when you are not bored. Good luck with it, mate.

[ReemFTW]

It sounds fun, and it's really catchy. Only one thing - it's repetitive. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing! Maybe it doesn't have to be a song. Could just be a tune :)
I think it's cool. Good luck with writing more songs!