feedback please.

[Dylan]

i recently completed my first song, but i can't record it properly so i tabbed it with guitar pro. please download and tell me what you think.

midi audio file: http://www.mediafire.com/?jqwlmnhnwqm
guitar pro file: http://www.mediafire.com/?zxhgmmrjnm0

i don't have a drum track yet, but im working on that. i don't know how to construct a drum part so it may take a while.

[Boni]

Since I can't stand Midi tracks I pumped my RSE on and it sounds pretty kick ass.

Do I sense some Hell Song influences around the chorus area?

[Dylan]

ya that'd be the post-chorus/solo part. i don't have a solo yet. and probably after the solo too where it's kinda slow. a few of my influences got mixed into this song. glad you like it, and how i turn on the rse to make it sound better?

[Madjid]

I opened it via GP.
Sounds rad, except for the fact that the bass matches the guitar, try a different bass line, i'm sure it's gonna sound better.
Cheers dude.

[Gibsum 41]

I opened it via GP.
Sounds rad, except for the fact that the bass matches the guitar, try a different bass line, i'm sure it's gonna sound better.
Cheers dude.

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Also, it'd be nice if you added some more variety with the chords.