wrote another one this past week
lyrics
I'm lying, on the tile floor
From falling out the swivel door
You walked right by me
With a wink and a smile
I'd get down on my knees to
make you mine
Why do I gotta be so damn shy?
Cause when I finally get the guts to walk up to you
Its gonna take all I've got not to
Scream out every little word
I've been wanting to say
I know I'm gonna blurt it out in some awkward way
Stumble over syllables
From I Love You to
What the hell have I got myself into?
Its pounding in my heart
I don't know where I should start
You looked me in the eye
The words just slipped my mind
You'd get down on your knees to
Say "be mine"
Why do I gotta be so damn blind?
"Every Little Word" - original
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
Awesome job! Love the lyrics and the guitar.
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
1st verse is reallllly good
second verse...eh?
thats all i heard
lol
second verse...eh?
thats all i heard
lol
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
yeah I agree with ya, the 2nd verse needs workShiv wrote:1st verse is reallllly good
second verse...eh?
thats all i heard
lol
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
Love it.
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
your best song
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Re: "Every Little Word" - original
thanks guys!