This is a song i just wrote down (not fully finished) it all just started coming to me. tell me what you guys think:
If you comeback to me
I just want you to know
I'm sorry this had to happen
and that we let go
I never wanted this to be
You as just a memory
Now I'm left here on the ground
All alone in this small town
Dreamin big and dying young
When I met you my life begun
I know that I am just a teen
But you were my own beauty queen
And now you're gone
When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)
The things we used to do together
Were oh so special to me
The way your hair flowed in the breeze
The way you bring me to my knee's
Now I'm walking all alone
Hearing you fade on the phone
Why's this love turned out to be
Such a faded memory
And now you're gone
When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)
And I'm bending to break (bending to break) 4-6x
When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)
I don't have a name for it.
Song I'm writing
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Re: Song I'm writing
Wrong section, but good
ConeBizzy32 wrote:Working on your request makes me a PD? I can't believe how small a man can be.Something Corporate wrote: I still cant get into the PD media sec
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Re: Song I'm writing
^ this is musicians is it not?
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Re: Song I'm writing
oh shit.
*see's lyrics section*
*see's lyrics section*
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Re: Song I'm writing
sumfan wrote:oh shit.
*see's lyrics section*
I love the song though. How long did it take you?
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Re: Song I'm writing
good song
tomhoppus is my Master!
NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!
NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!
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Re: Song I'm writing
thanks. (thans wiggles). About 10-20 minutes.Buttercup wrote:sumfan wrote:oh shit.
*see's lyrics section*
I love the song though. How long did it take you?
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Re: Song I'm writing
Awesome song, for the title why dont u just use fading memorey or fade away
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Re: Song I'm writing
me likey.
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Re: Song I'm writing
CIRCUITzach wrote:me likey.
Hentaimans N00B! Mess with me and before you know it, you end up in a coffin. Jealous?
Sumfan is my n00b.
hem is my grand-n00b.
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Re: Song I'm writing
your face.kevin5064 wrote:i dont like it
just kidding