The Circle Goes Forever (Working title)

Hentaiman · Post by **Hentaiman** » Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:58 pm

Its another kinda Metalcore/Hardcore punk oriented song i wrote.
Working title is "The Circle Goes Forever".

Now! Now! Now! Yeah! [harsh scream]

[verse 1]
I never knew
I'm gonna sell my soul
It felt so true
It felt like hitting a wall! [growl]
I Shouldn't've sell my soul
It was all a mistake
Why the hell I answered that call?
Why the fuck were I awake?! [growl]

[chorus]
Yeah! Now! [growl]
You can't stop! [growl]
The circle goes forever!
Yeah! Now! [growl]
Satan has your soul!
The devil takes his reign
you sould your soul forever!

[verse 2]
When you sold your soul
You lost a part of yourself
Its like hitting a wall
Only alone... without help! [growl]
When i saw such chance
I felt so confident
I would want to stop
But now... I can't! [growl]

[chorus]

You sold your soul forever [x3] [quiet vocals]
YOU SOLD YOUR SOUL FOREVER! [growl]

[guitar solo + outro]

Kano · Post by **Kano** » Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:34 pm

i like it but im notr into hardcore (apart from rise againts and there hardly hard core they just say they are)

but anyway well done!

J-Pan · Post by **J-Pan** » Sat Feb 16, 2008 11:32 pm

nice but i agree...;; im not soo into the whole hardcore thing..

:? :?

Peterr · Post by **Peterr** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:07 am

Same... :| :| :|

Post by **Dylan** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:17 am

i don't like it. :? sorry dude.

I'm A Cunt [*banned*] · Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:25 am

if this is bfmv type screams nice.

if not teh failzorz.

tomhoppus · Post by **tomhoppus** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:57 am

i dont like hardcore stuff, but i kinda like it

Hentaiman · Post by **Hentaiman** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:26 am

Thanx for the comments, guys, and Bullet_guy (could i call you like that now? :D), yeah its kinda like BFMV screams, kinda hardcore, but really, if you guys have any ideas for a better melody or genre of music that it'll fit into, just tell me what you got in mind, what melody is in your head.

NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b

I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.

K. · Post by K. » Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:39 pm

[quote="Hentaiman"]Thanx for the comments, guys, and Bullet_guy (could i call you like that now? :D),quote]
u can call him sumfan

Post by **Dylan** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:58 pm

Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.

i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.

Hentaiman · Post by **Hentaiman** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:22 pm

NoReason27 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.

Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.

tomhoppus · Post by **tomhoppus** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:23 pm

Hentaiman wrote:
NoReason27 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.
Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.

Like Sum 41??

Hentaiman · Post by **Hentaiman** » Tue Mar 04, 2008 9:04 pm

tomhoppus wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:
NoReason27 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:NoReason27, well i respect your honesty, and you could check the other song i posted here few days ago, i just got no comments about it, except from HilgaMan, but its obvious, cuz he's my n00b
I would like to hear what you guys think about the other song.
i will, its not that this song is bad, it's i don't listen to the hardcore stuff.
Yeah im not that into hardcore either but some hardcore is nice, but if you have ideas for a more punky melody, its fine by me, since we play in band kinda this Punk with Heavy metal, thats why Hardcore is kinda between, but we play stuff from Punk to Metal so its cool.
Like Sum 41??

Yeah, kinda like :D
and heavier stuff too.

Avey41 · Post by **Avey41** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:27 am

wow i love it :)
your all making me feel good about my lyrics and songs now cause i am similar

HilgaMan · Post by **HilgaMan** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 7:39 pm

No offense, this is cool too, but I think the older songs u showed me are better.

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