Twenty Mistakes She's a Tramp

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Twenty Mistakes She's a Tramp

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this is a song i recently wrote. so yeah..

VERSE 1
im home early at about 10,
i walked in and saw her with 3 or for men,
and a dog,
im so sick of the lies,
and them fucking alabies,
its time to end it now, so
go and take a bow,
i hope you happy with what you've done
i feel sorry for your son,
its all over now,
so go n get outta town



CHORUS
Good Riddance she's gone, now i can move on, she'll take you hell and back, just to give you a crack, hey !, hey!, hey!, hey!
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( just another tramp )
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( wasting her life away )
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( just another mistake )
nanana, nanana, nanananaa ( just another tramp )

VERSE 2
i saw her in the park the other day,
she was with a guy,
i knew exactly what she wanted from him,
little did he know he was in for a spin,
suddenly she puts her hand right firmly on his nob,
and from what i heard it felt like corn on the cob

CHORUS
Good Riddance she's gone, now i can move on, she'll take you hell and back, just to give you a crack, hey !
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( just another tramp )
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( wasting her life away )
nanana, nanana, nanananaaa ( just another mistake )
nanana, nanana, nanananaa ( just another tramp )

hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey ! hey !


thats all i got. i kinda got writers block for the break down.

your thoughts?
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Post by Dylan »

so many "na"s :lol: and "hey"s

smells like a good song.
you have far too much time on your hands

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thats cool
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Post by LTS »

NoReason27 wrote:so many "na"s :lol: and "hey"s

smells like a good song.
actually, it smells kinda like.... .teen spirit.....
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Post by minton32 »

yeah sorry about the mistakes...... i had the lyrics in guitar pro so it didnt correct.

the actual song is here :

http://www.mediafire.com/?brafggaoph2

thats just the music no lyrics.
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