Before anyone bashes me, I credit Sum 41 for the ideas in this piece.
Razor blades cut through my skin
I give up, you win
Tell me lies, say words, make me believe
Set me up to fall before you leave
Tear me, Rip me, break me apart
It’s what I deserve, I feel no remorse at all
If this isn’t a lie
Look me in the eye and tell me
You aren’t setting me up to bleed
Life you already haven’t planted the seed
Committed the crime, done the deed
Truth be told you’re weak
Why are lies inseparable
Like they’re glued shut
These walls don’t come down
We stay stuck
Tryin to escape our lonely rut
Eyes wide open, but the heart shut
Kind of hopeless, feeling useless
Restless to break free
Tell me, tell me, tell me
What do you see?
The blood stains on the carpet
Stop it, you’re full of shit
Go left, I’m goin right
This is our last right
Cold feed from stage fright
Yeah that’s right, run away
Lie all you want
Deceiver, cheater
You aren’t cut to be a leader
Go away, I see it now
Burnt bridges, after the ashes it’s all in ruins
Quit cryin keep movin
Cheaters don’t stop
Even when they’re caught
Set this trail on fire
Drag me through the mud till we grow tired
Liar, liar
You don’t got guts
Finish what you started
Don’t stop till I’ve got cuts
Broken, bruised, numb, and empty hearted
Tell Me A Lie
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
It shifts very much, if you could remember this whole piece of text with a full set of other songs, well then... you're cool
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
I like it ;)
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
Lie all you want
Deceiver, cheater
You aren’t cut to be a leader
The only part i don't like, seems like you just put that for the rhyme.
Deceiver, cheater
You aren’t cut to be a leader
The only part i don't like, seems like you just put that for the rhyme.
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
This is really good. I can see that Deryck has an influence on you :P
Edit: You said it yourself :D
Edit: You said it yourself :D
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
Pretty strong opening line you have there.
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
BrandonCorey wrote:Pretty strong opening line you have there.
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Re: Tell Me A Lie
lol thank you for feedback, yeah Deryck influenced me a lot in this, also kind of helped that i'm going through a rough time right now. =(