Dead-End Path

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this is a political song. unfortunately I dont have the music for it because I suck at putting music and lyrics together. I know it's long but I'm VERY proud of it so if you take the time to read it and comment I appreciate it big time.

Verse 1
What is happening to this nation?
Everywhere I look there's so much aggravation
We're drowning as a society
Bleeding with anxiety
How God-less of a nation have we become?
And my generation is still so young
But we're brainwashed by ignorance
Guilty of having no innocence
What's it gonna come to?

Chorus
Cross my heart, I hope you die
After filling my head with all your lies
Leading us down, a dead-end path
We're the victims of political aftermath

Verse 2
Wake up and we're still at war
Do we still know what we're fighting for?
I can't live with all the insanity
Spreading across humanity
It's time for a revolution
Take back the Constitution
We're going against our history
It's a disgrace to Lady Liberty
Our Founding Fathers are turning over in their graves

(Chorus)

Bridge
Every last one of you is full of shit
You talk and talk and prove you're a hypocrite
Just once I wanna hear you stick to your word
And not do the opposite of everything I've heard

(Chorus)

Verse 3
With a fucked up system and homophobic leaders
What are we supposed to do?
They invade our privacy like mind-readers
And keep us from the things we wanna do
Always out of their jurisdiction
Like aliens crossing the boarder
Speeches full of contradiction
We have the law, so where's the order?

(Chorus)
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Don't we already have a thread for lyrics?

Also, you listen to too much Green Day.
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Gregorovich wrote:Don't we already have a thread for lyrics?

Also, you listen to too much Green Day.
This is the "Your Lyrics" forum... for posts such as this! Fool :P
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i like it ... though it's kind of like a remix of a lot of other songs lyrics
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True lyrics. Good job!
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I hate political songs, but this was pretty catchy not gonna lie.
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Jake wrote:
Gregorovich wrote:Don't we already have a thread for lyrics?

Also, you listen to too much Green Day.
This is the "Your Lyrics" forum... for posts such as this! Fool :P
Could've sworn this was under Whatever... I'm going senile. :suicide:
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nothing wrong with listening to Green Day lol

and thank you for the compliments guys/girls!
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Gregorovich wrote:
Jake wrote:
Gregorovich wrote:Don't we already have a thread for lyrics?

Also, you listen to too much Green Day.
This is the "Your Lyrics" forum... for posts such as this! Fool :P
Could've sworn this was under Whatever... I'm going senile. :suicide:
Jake fucked with you, he's the fucking mod

And I only like the first verse, it's pretty good, but the chorus, I hate the cross my heart shit, it's overused
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