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A poem....

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I sat there on the ground,
While the sky seemed to cry,
The rain drops fell,
They splashed onto the ground,
No one could see my tears,
No one could see my fears,
Fears of death,
Tears of sorrow,
For now I see what is happening,
The world is dying,
The world isn't becoming a better place,
With George W. Bush?
America isn't a better race,
The land of the fee they call it,
I call it the land of the tears,
The day the airplanes crashed,
They crashed into the twin towers,
So many tears were shed,
and so many tears are still to be shed,
So many hearts were broken,
So many lives were taken,
They say they went to a better place?
But how do we know?
We loved all the ones you died that day,
we miss all the ones that died,
So many loved ones were taken,
So many loved ones who took themselves.
What is going on?
Why is nothing happening,
Everytime we shed a tear?
What do we think?
The tears of joy mean happiness,
While the tears of sorrow mean depression
Where is the world now?
Where is America now?
All I know is it's raining,
and no one can see the tears I shed.
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Post by Zam »

Beautiful. Did you have someone close to you die in the attacks? It seems so.... personal.
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^ ya what zam said
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Post by UnderclassHeroine »

No I didn't.
My friend's brother in going into the war.
It tickes me off.
And one of my brand new friends is in the Army.
I hope he doesn't go.

But I did know a few people who had someone that they new die in it.
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Post by Zam »

Oh.... Sorry...

Remember they're giving up their lives for your country.
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Post by UnderclassHeroine »

Yeah.
I know.
They wouldn't have to if people were more mature and actually talked things out instead of having war and terrorist bullshit.
But that will never happen.
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Post by TheGuyWhoLikesToast »

As zam said.Beautiful.
Your lyrics are really something.
I think you're really talented.
:D good job
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Thanks. :)
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