Heres the Lyrics to my first song can anybody tell me if its good or wat i need to change.
Awaken The Monster
I don't feel the way i've ever felt
but I know
That theres something dark inside of me
I can feel it grow
ITS STARTING TO TAKE OVER ME . . .
When you wake up the monster inside you >
you'll see whats its like to be so cruel > CHORUS
And in the end you'll realize >
When you look yourself in the eyes >
And then it takes over your body
It takes over your soul
It takes over your mind
And then you'll know
You've become a mindless puppet
Escaping from Reality
You won't be who you used to be
YOU CAN'T LET IT CONTROL YOU . . .
*CHORUS*
then i plan on there being a solo here and then the chorus again
My First Song.
- Noreason757
- Hooch
- Posts: 461
- Joined: Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:53 am
- First name: Sean
- Age: 24
- Gender: ♂
- PSN ID: NoReason757
- Instrument 1: keyboard
- Instrument 2: guitar
- Contact:
- Tyler41
- Walking Disaster
- Posts: 809
- Joined: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:28 am
- Age: 25
- Gender: ♂
- Instrument 1: Guitar
- Instrument 2: Bass
- Instrument 3: Piano
- Location: Austin, Texas
Re: My First Song.
pretty good, especially for a first song. i dig it.
All that I need is time for me to breathe. Dream little dreams that only I believe. Now that I see beyond the light, I'm gonna be, I'll be alright.
- UltraKolby
- Hooch
- Posts: 412
- Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2010 1:50 am
- First name: Kolby
- Age: 17
- Gender: ♂
- Instrument 1: Guitar
- Instrument 2: Piano
- Location: America