Kept Running In Silence

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Kept Running In Silence

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this is a song about my friend Kris. she suddenly ended our friendship out of the blue without even telling me, so i wrote about it. notice the clever acronym title, (K)ept (R)unning (I)n (S)ilence :smug:

Intro
What happend to you?
Where's the one I once knew?
I don't know who or what you've become
Why or what this all started from
It was said that we'd never lose each other
That you thought of me as a brother
And trusted me more than your mother
If you decide to wake up in the end
Hope you realize you lost a friend
You'll be sorry then

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Sick of how your life is, you kept running in silence
Wish I knew what it's all about
I've done all I could to reach out
You resisted someway somehow

Verse 1
Hurting from things green and white
Among others you did out of sight
Can't learn guidance from being on your own
That's what you get out of a broken home

Pre-Chorus
No wonder why I hadn't heard from you in longer than so long
(You are not as bad as some)
I never thought we'd end like this but I guess that I was wrong
(But you are as fake as they come)

(Chorus)

Verse 2
No note, no goodbye, not even a courtesy call
So much for the times I picked you up when you'd fall
Talking all the time, we made a great team
Now you've disappeared like it was all just a dream

(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)

Bridge
An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth
Nothing worse than a lie, taken as the truth
Don't turn the tables, or try to break my heart
I know you don't care, you haven't from the start

(Chorus)
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Wow dude this is amazing. Your writing skills are awesome!
Sorry about Kris, though. :sad:
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I don't like it...at all.

It seems forced.
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I like it, it's angry and shows the emotion.
Yeah and too bad about Kris :(
Nice acronym, though!
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Thanks a lot i really appreciate your compliments and feedback :smile:
No Slither, it's not forced.
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yea i disagree with slither
it doesnt sound forced at all and sounds great man! :2cool4u:

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Shiv wrote:yea i disagree with slither
it doesnt sound forced at all and sounds great man! :2cool4u:
thanks dude :glad:
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It may be a little forced but it's still amazing. The only reason it's forced is because he felt like he needed to write it and thats good.
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It's amazing how you wrote this song. Great song!
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Da_Aman and turtlehobopirate thank you both i appreciate it :]
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sprinks41 wrote:Thanks a lot i really appreciate your compliments and feedback :smile:
No Slither, it's not forced.
You probably don't even know what I was talking about.

I was talking about the lyrics. Duh.
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Slither wrote:You probably don't even know what I was talking about.

I was talking about the lyrics. Duh.
as in the rhymes were forced? if so, then again, they're not.

otherwise, please explain what you mean?
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Forget him,
I dont usually comment on lyrics, but thats a touching song you got there. Good job!
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phatass wrote:Forget him,
I dont usually comment on lyrics, but thats a touching song you got there. Good job!
thank you very much! :]
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thats really good., youve put the story across well, and nice title :)
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PunkSteve wrote:thats really good., youve put the story across well, and nice title :)
thanks man :]
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no problem :)
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