cheesy pickup line - original song

[Heather]

I know the bridge chords needs some work, I just threw it together real quick

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-A2r5ZJ9WC0

Lyrics ( I kinda messed up a few of them in the video )
you look in the mirror to make sure your hair is jsut right
and blow a kiss to every girl that passes you by
you're all they think about
thats something I'll never figure out

Cause they're to blind to see, that you're just a prom king
you try so hard to get me, but you keep on forgetting
that I'm not impressed, and you're out of luck
look how good you are at getting her
too bad she's not the one your running after

you've asked me out at least a thousand times
don't worry there's plenty of girls waiting in line
I've thrown away all your flowers
So stop calling me every freakin half hour

Cause you think you're every girls wildest dream
you try so hard to get me, but keep on forgetting
that I'm not impressed, and you're out of luck
thinking I'll come around for sure
too bad that you're not the one I'm looking for

So go ahead and tell all your friends
that you've got me, just where you want me
and you'll have me in no time
just have to lay down one more cheesy line

Now you're starting to split at the seems
you tried to hard to get me, and kept on forgetting
that I'm not impressed and you're out of luck
please don't try anymore
too bad I have found the one I'm looking for

[Jeremy Kill]

Fixed it for ya!

I liked the song, it's got a catchy melody. Though it made me sad as I remembered all the times I've bombed. D=D

[Shiv]

Fixed it for ya!

I liked the song, it's got a catchy melody. Though it made me sad as I remembered all the times I've bombed. D=D

i like it

invest in a microphone!!!!!
and record them seperately!!!!

other than that great

[rockindrummer41]

Fixed it for ya!

I liked the song, it's got a catchy melody. Though it made me sad as I remembered all the times I've bombed. D=D

i like it

invest in a microphone!!!!!
and record them seperately!!!!

other than that great

[ReemFTW]

I love it! The melody is really nice, and I really like your voice in this song =]
Great Job!

[Kelbunk]

i really like this song
youre pretty deadly

[Hentaiman]

Its pretty damn awesome!
I liked the lyrics and the vocal melody overall, fitted very nice with the music.

[turtlehobopirate]

Awesome song! I think it should flow a little better, like how you stop between each half line, you should make those pauses shorter. Amazing lyrics though.

[Heather]

thanks for fixing it up Jeremy

and thanks for all the comments, I really appreciate it. I have a cheap microphone but need to invest in a recording software of some sort. I did free trial for like a week but that was years ago.

thanks again guys and gals

[CIRCUITzach]

nice.
heres a easy pick up line
Man : Hi i am not a rangers fan, i dont like sucky players like brandon dubinsky and i like good music like 311
women. lets do it.

[Shiv]

nice.
heres a easy pick up line
Man : Hi i am not a rangers fan, i dont like sucky players like brandon dubinsky and i like good music like 311
women. lets do it.

is the woman really zach in disguise???
probably cuz hes gay