rock rap song i wrote...

[minton32]

here's a song i wrote about two types of 'fads' or groups of people today lol. its like its what we're all about but way funkier lol

So I’m out in the street, and I’m all alone
Thinking’ about how I’m gonna get home
I look around and what do I see
A bunch of pre-teens staring at me.
Cold blooded eyes, with dyed black hair
And piercings going from ear to ear
What is wrong with the world today, now
I gotta get outta here, or I’m gonna be sick

We only got, one hope, ROCK!
We only got, one try, ROCK!
Yeah, come on and save us, ROCK!
Come on and say it loud, ROCK!

Now what is this, what’s happened to my eyes?
What is up with these metro guys?
All they do is worry about their hair
Piss off mate, I really don’t care
Fluro everywhere, techno loud
What the fuck is with this crowd
Shuffle left, shuffle right
I cannont put up with this tonight
All these new bands, invade our nation
With pussy ass names like metro station
Sha-sha-sha sha sha a shut your mouth
I don’t wanna hear none of this,
I guess there is only 1 way to stop this shit

We only got, one hope, ROCK!
We only got, one try, ROCK!
Yeah, come on and save us, ROCK!
Come on and say it loud, ROCK!

All these people can’t make up their mind
Ready to fall into any fad line, now
What is wrong with people today
Doing anything that ‘the man’ will say
So, what happened to the good ol’ days
Where none of these people acted like gays
Now hold up! I’m not being crude,
I didn’t mean no offence, I’m not being rude
I meant it in a stupid sense way,
Like instead of dumb, like “ that’s so gay ! “
So anyway, back to my rant
What is up with these silly metro ants
Acting all hard, getting in my way
I think I’m gonna blow up, so get away
Move it bitch, get out my way
I’ll never give in, I’m never gonna stay
What we need is something to save us
The gift of rock is coming to save us

constructive criticism please

[upperclasszero]

im sure sum 41 would be proud of u

[Madjid]

It's a great song, i really like it.

[J-Pan]

lol the metro bits pretty funny, but anyways really good song

[withchappedlips]

I think it's retarded that everyone writes rebellious songs about the kids with black hair and eye liner... because in reality, there really isn't that many like that. What about all the kids wearing the same exact hollister shirts with the same exact short brown hair, or whatever. I mean, I am one of those kids, but I don't understand why they don't get anything for what they do. At least those wearing other things aren't all the same, as unoriginal as they can be. This is a decent lyric, but pretty stupid overall simply because there really isn't problem because someone dyes their hair black. In fact, most people look better with jet black hair.

[J-Pan]

I think it's retarded that everyone writes rebellious songs about the kids with black hair and eye liner... because in reality, there really isn't that many like that. What about all the kids wearing the same exact hollister shirts with the same exact short brown hair, or whatever. I mean, I am one of those kids, but I don't understand why they don't get anything for what they do. At least those wearing other things aren't all the same, as unoriginal as they can be. This is a decent lyric, but pretty stupid overall simply because there really isn't problem because someone dyes their hair black. In fact, most people look better with jet black hair.

but thats not what the song is about, its about just what the modern stereotypes are, its not trying to diss people with dyed blak hair or anything.

[LTS]

That's a pretty cool song. If i write a riff for it, i'll cover it some day...