[A song I wrote] Mistakes (Lets take a Break)

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[A song I wrote] Mistakes (Lets take a Break)

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[verse 1]
Tearing apart such a beautiful day now
Looking again at you sitting alone
I know now that I'm not the one
that ruined all your fuckin' week
And I know we had some good times
I know we had some time to think
I think the time has come now
For this ship of love to sink

[chorus]
So know that I wish you to get well
While you sitting cold in the dark
But please don't blame me for your mistakes
Because these mistakes,
like earthquakes,
Doesn't seem to pay back for a heart ache!

[verse 2]
I know you'll forgive me eventually
But let me be selfish just this time
You may be crying, you're probably denying
But please let me happy for myself
Maybe I will meet you one sunny day
Till then, I guess i'm just slipping away

[chorus]
[guitar interlude]

[bridge]
I would lie, I would deny
If I'd say i'm miserable again
But this time I think its best
to take a break

[chorus x2]

For a heart ache!! [x4]


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Pretty good !

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Thanx!!
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niceee job man
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good job
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Thanx :D
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