For The Girl I'll Never Get

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For The Girl I'll Never Get

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Yes, I nicked the title from the other song on this page, but I thought It was a decent title.

Also, I recycled a chorus from a previous song.

I want to take this opportunity to annouce my new acoustic project, called 'Church & Destroy'. www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic

constructive criticism please!

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She looks like she's cold and she's tired
She looks like an angel to me
I hated to say, it sounded cliche
but she means the world to me

She's been through alot, well we all have
If she would just call Id be there
Before I would go, I'd let her know
She doesnt see how much I care

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

She tells me about all her feelings
But not of her feelings for me
If she would just say, I want you today
It would make it perfect for me

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

Shes out of my leage says my body
My heart says shes already yours
I wrote her this song, to move us along
Some day I will be all hers

This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete

Yes,
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
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shes on in a million which makes my chances like a million to one.
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nice song
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:wordyo:
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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Great chorus.
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Nice song. the chorus is really great yeah. Although this subject is so overddone in my opinion, haha, but hey, even I have like a song or two about a girl i'll never get, I think we all do haha.
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CIRCUITzach wrote:shes on in a million which makes my chances like a million to one.
lol thats a four year strong lyrics good lyric

anyway
i realy like it dude thats good as nice job
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Hentaiman wrote:Nice song. the chorus is really great yeah. Although this subject is so overddone in my opinion, haha, but hey, even I have like a song or two about a girl i'll never get, I think we all do haha.
I don't have songs about girl that i'll never get, cause i've noticed that i can get every girl i want ;|
sad, isn't it? :(
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Just like to say, Church & Destroy demoed this today, and it sounds brilliant.

www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic - add us, if you havent already.
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