My latest song. I just finished it. I'm not 100% satisfied, but it's half past midnight here, and i got a flash of inspriation and I had to write it down.
Seeing as my new band has a sort of Hawthorne Heights / Brand New kind of vibe, this fits quite well. Its quite upbeat, despite having whiny lyrics.
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I will wait for you
If you tell me to stay here
I will pray for you
awaiting answers to my ear
I'm Sorry for
All the things I never did
But I could never lie
I'm feeling paralyzed
With every inch that I was crawling
Look in my eyes
and tell me It was me who's stalling
Paint my demise
On the canvas black and white
It's not hard to see
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
I'm not the one who would
Save you from your second story
And even if I could
I wouldnt give you any glory
Your hazel glace
Stops me stalking in your tracks
Its a catastrophe
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
I'm incomplete
I'm incomplete
Theres a pain in me
And it wont go away
Just you wait and see
There is more to me
Some day I'll be free
because
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
Yes
This is not the end,
it is only the start
and my dreams are motion
not falling apart
my eyes burn with anger
much less jelousy
I'm trying my hardest
but i'm so incomplete
Stories
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Re: Stories
damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!
if you like this Q&A, then you should read my story:Jan 22, 2009
cone u r so fucking kool stevo u r fucking bizzyd u r cool too whats your new album called
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Contrary to what you just wrote, I'm not fucking bizzy d. We're just friends. Let's not go and make Cone jealous now...
answered by Stevo on Jan 22, 2009 2:18pm
http://theresnosolution.com/forum/viewt ... =25&t=5382
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Re: Stories
The best lyrics come at night.xmarryxx wrote:damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!
You care a lot less about what you write down, and it propels you to write things you normally wouldn't think of. Or at least that's what I think.
but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.
So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,
I'm just not ready to leave my room.
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Re: Stories
Welcome The NightKyle wrote:The best lyrics come at night.xmarryxx wrote:damn thats good, especially good since you wrote in the middle of the night!
You care a lot less about what you write down, and it propels you to write things you normally wouldn't think of. Or at least that's what I think.
ORLY?
But, good job on the song.
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Re: Stories
CHORUS ROX!
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Re: Stories
This is the chorus i reused for 'For The Girl I'll Never Get'
Also, mods, can we get rid of this Cone Crusher message?
Also, mods, can we get rid of this Cone Crusher message?