own first song-like Sum41

[Wo2LA Drummer]

hello

what do you think of this song?
it'a the first own song ;)

thanks for listening

best regards

[Mitchell]

Aside from the fact that this is a massive With Me ripoff, it sounds pretty fucking good, almost too good.

[SickofEveryone]

I didn't like. ANd I hope you never joined just to post that video..

[Ardi41]

haha like sum 41

[Wo2LA Drummer]

okey it's a little bit too similar

if you hear only Sum41 each day, then can't come out one different

[Gregorovich]

Really good, but yeah honestly I have never heard one amateur song so similar to a another professional one.

[HugoDisasters]

Really good, but yeah honestly I have never heard one amateur song so similar to a another professional one.

This. totally.

[Dylan]

what everyone else said: massive rip off. i suggest you try harder next time, i mean the title is even a rip off. "without you" vs "with me". come on dude.

if you hear only Sum41 each day, then can't come out one different

are you serious? there is way better music out there than sum 41. listen to different types of music and maybe you'll come back with something original.

[Resident Skumfuk]

that sounded like a ripoff of With Me as covered by like Creed or some shit. You have a good voice, but as others have said, just find your own sound.

[sumfan4]

I hope you never joined just to post that video..

Clearly did. We won't be seeing him around.

[Jeremy Kill]

It is really well done. Vocals are nice, overall quality is great, but it sounds too generic. If I were to turn on a soft rock radio station, this is the kind of song I'd expect to hear.

The song isn't unlistenable, it's just unoriginal.