Wake up - Early demo

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Wake up - Early demo

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this is a song im working on, and so far i've recorded the guitar for it, and ive done the vocals for the intro. can u guys tell me what u think of it so far.

http://soundcloud.com/seanmdavis757/wake-up-demo-phase

ps: for the vocals i know the singing isnt the greatest right now cause its me singing but once i get my vocalist to come over he will redo it and it would sound good. :silly:
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Link doesn't work. :winkwink:
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SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work. :winkwink:
It worked for me.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
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I think it was pretty cool. You sang a bit out of key tho.
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silverdolphin wrote:
SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work. :winkwink:
It worked for me.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
thanks ill work on the sloppyness lol, im gonna record actual drums instead of drum loops though, my friend ivan is gonna help me with it so it should be looking pretty good when its completely finished, thanks for your input though i appreciate it :glad: :winkwink:
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Noreason757 wrote:
silverdolphin wrote:
SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work. :winkwink:
It worked for me.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
thanks ill work on the sloppyness lol, im gonna record actual drums instead of drum loops though, my friend ivan is gonna help me with it so it should be looking pretty good when its completely finished, thanks for your input though i appreciate it :glad: :winkwink:
No problem. Sorry if I sounded a bit harsh :confusion:
Keep practising :)
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