this is a song im working on, and so far i've recorded the guitar for it, and ive done the vocals for the intro. can u guys tell me what u think of it so far.
http://soundcloud.com/seanmdavis757/wake-up-demo-phase
ps: for the vocals i know the singing isnt the greatest right now cause its me singing but once i get my vocalist to come over he will redo it and it would sound good.
Wake up - Early demo
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Re: Wake up - Early demo
Link doesn't work.
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Re: Wake up - Early demo
It worked for me.SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
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Re: Wake up - Early demo
I think it was pretty cool. You sang a bit out of key tho.
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Re: Wake up - Early demo
thanks ill work on the sloppyness lol, im gonna record actual drums instead of drum loops though, my friend ivan is gonna help me with it so it should be looking pretty good when its completely finished, thanks for your input though i appreciate itsilverdolphin wrote:It worked for me.SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
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Re: Wake up - Early demo
No problem. Sorry if I sounded a bit harshNoreason757 wrote:thanks ill work on the sloppyness lol, im gonna record actual drums instead of drum loops though, my friend ivan is gonna help me with it so it should be looking pretty good when its completely finished, thanks for your input though i appreciate itsilverdolphin wrote:It worked for me.SickofEveryone wrote:Link doesn't work.
I like the intro, but your playing sounded sloppy & you should have put some drum loops.
Keep practising :)