My first compo

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My first compo

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Hey, I would want your opinions on my first song :)

http://soundcloud.com/lowsick1/differents-ways-final

Ps: Sorry, I've a french accent :S and i'm not a singer :devious:

Thx :)

and for sum 41's cover : http://soundcloud.com/lowsick1/ :)
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A stronger voice and it would be quite good actually.
Other than that it feels incredibly sad.

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Very sad.... But why is cartman singing? :silly: Kidding, love ya really :glad:
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I know, my voice sucks at some parts but i do my best for the moment, my voice is better day after day :)

Thanks for your opinions,That helps me :blush:

I need more :)
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Yeah I think it was pretty nice. If you sing a bit louder and more confident it will be great
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I like it! It's a sad song, and agree about the vocals being a bit weak. But you're trying your best I know, so I think it definetely has potential to become a great song :)
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Lowsick wrote:I know, my voice sucks at some parts but i do my best for the moment, my voice is better day after day :)

Thanks for your opinions,That helps me :blush:

I need more :)
Dude, if your voice is improving then you are lucky, mine just stays the same tuneless ol' bastard it always was :2cool4u: Keep at it :glad:
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Pretty good for a first song!
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Thx for your comments


And i see sum 41 at Friday, i'm Fucking existing !
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