yo so i just recently uploaded probably my most personal/meaningful song to date. not gonna lie, it's an anti-suicide one and i wrote it to both get myself outta the state of mind i've been in for awhile and to possibly inspire others who might be feeling the same way. granted it's not very sum-ish, but lemme know what you guys think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AX3KNT-u ... r_embedded
ps i'm not still thinking about doing anything to hurt myself, as i'm sure you can figure out from the song anyway.
One of My Proudest Originals
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Re: One of My Proudest Originals
I listened to it twice,once listening to the instrumentals,than lyrics,and I kinda like both ...there are two songs that I like more from you , but this one has taken a good place too !
I am putting the gun away right now
I am putting the gun away right now
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
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That was great! It sounds well-rounded and complete. The guitar playing is really good too! Positive songs, FTW!
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Re: One of My Proudest Originals
It's funny because Screaming Bloody Murder is about all but positive...Jeremy Kill wrote:That was great! It sounds well-rounded and complete. The guitar playing is really good too! Positive songs, FTW!
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Really? The endings of the title track and Skumfuk are positive; they don't leave you with "life fucking sucks". Blood In My Eyes doesn't really show any obvious positivity, but it's just moving on despite everything.FakeNinja wrote:It's funny because Screaming Bloody Murder is about all but positive...Jeremy Kill wrote:That was great! It sounds well-rounded and complete. The guitar playing is really good too! Positive songs, FTW!
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Re: One of My Proudest Originals
exactly,it's the same thing with Adam Song by Blink 182,it's cleat that the song is against suicide and to motivate people to hold on and wait for better times to come,believe in them ...but still many people say that it's a suicide song XD because they fucking listen to the first to verses and then they don't care...Jeremy Kill wrote:Really? The endings of the title track and Skumfuk are positive; they don't leave you with "life fucking sucks". Blood In My Eyes doesn't really show any obvious positivity, but it's just moving on despite everything.FakeNinja wrote:It's funny because Screaming Bloody Murder is about all but positive...Jeremy Kill wrote:That was great! It sounds well-rounded and complete. The guitar playing is really good too! Positive songs, FTW!
Mark: Sometimes when I talk in 3rd person i end up calling tom mark
Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
Some people think were idiots or perverts dont argue were both.
"i think we're gonna be one of those bands thats around forever and even makes records, even if noones buying them and using them for toilet paper...but we'll still make them because we'll be the best fuckin toilet paper anyones ever used...." - Tom Delonge