and another one - "So Long"

[Dex01]

I dunno how but I did yet another track.

http://www.last.fm/music/Dex01/You+Put+ ... lf/So+Long

this one is the best so far. feel free to download (for free) and as always, feedback is very helpful.

[bizzyd53]

I like the layout of the song, but you need to smoothen out the transition from the soft to "hard" part. The hard to soft flowed though, so that's good.

[Dex01]

Thanks a lot. learning how to transition different parts in my music is definitely something I need to learn to do. though it may just be the software I'm using. Garageband doesn't seem to have a "fade" feature

[Heather]

At the beginning it didn't seem like the vocals were on the same rhythm as the guitars. You songs have catchy hooks, just need fine tuning.

[Nic]

That was pretty catchy. I like it man. Nice work.