A song I wrote - "This Doesn't Concern You"

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A song I wrote - "This Doesn't Concern You"

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Here's a song I put together today. It has its fair share of problems but I don't think it's too bad! :silly:

http://www.last.fm/music/Dex01/Alex+Hux ... oncern+You

just click where it says "play direct from Dex01" (it's silent for 7 seconds for some reason :confusion: )

I plan to to do more in the future at some point. wanted to know what you guys think!

feel free to download it and shit!

thanks! :glad:
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The beginning sounds a bit like "What you say" by Sugarcult, 0:19 - 0:23. The rest sounds a little 'empty' and underproduced.
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haha yeah I thought that myself when I was recording :silly:

yeah it's like the rawest you can get with this as I don't have any professional recording equipment :sosad:

but thanks for not ripping into it.
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Dex01 wrote:feel free to download it and shit!
thank you, i will feel free to shit. thanks for the permission, i may go do that right now.
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So, uh, this whole "free download" comment... I can get just about any music I want for free, and I can probably find a lot more quality music to listen to for free. When will you start shelling out paypal cash for downloads? I might have interest.
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Sounds good
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Kyle! wrote: When will you start shelling out paypal cash for downloads? I might have interest.
um, never.

and thanks to you ^
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Kyle! wrote:So, uh, this whole "free download" comment... I can get just about any music I want for free, and I can probably find a lot more quality music to listen to for free. When will you start shelling out paypal cash for downloads? I might have interest.
I think you missunderstood the comment. It says 'feel free' not 'for free'. Even though it is free, i think you read it wrong. Anyways nice tunes
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Thanks! I'm currently working on my second song but I could still use some feedback on this one.
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