my new song: Mr.RockNRoll

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my new song: Mr.RockNRoll

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kind of inspired by Deryck. BTW I got a keyboard for my bday, so I set a drum beat to the song
With a bottle of Jack starring him straight in the face
He sings of a song built on his broken face

On ice his thoughts sit and simmers
Until that one melody just seems to fit

His fingers are blistered from playing the strings
Of an old beat up vintage from '63

He's geared up for touring and playing the shows
He feels more at home when he's on the road

Light up the match let the smoking begin
He's thrown himself into his work again

With his last song still yet to be sung
He looks as me and says live fast and die young
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Just.. AMAZING !!!! :)

Liked everything.. but the quality of the recording.

Thumbs up!

one suggestion i'd suggest is that whwn you sing "young" at the last verse, don't stay on the same tone. go down after a few seconds..

Keep up the good work! :devious:
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I saw "Mr.Ro..." and I got all excited thinking it was Mr.Roboto by Styx... *sigh*
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omg! it's really good! i like it!
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:) you should send it to Deryck ...as I said before your voice is simply amazing
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FuckT41182 wrote::) you should send it to Deryck ...as I said before your voice is simply amazing
yeahh youre gooood
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did different version, better or worse?
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I like the first one better :happy:
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I would also go with the first one :)
This is Mark Allen Hoppus. He likes long walks on the beach. This, this is travis barker. He likes to be read poetry just before sunset. And me, I like to stick small pieces of furniture up my butt.
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Tom:Yea than he starts touching me and i think thats masturbation
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I like the first version better, but I really like that melody of the guitar in the second one!
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yeah, I'm leaning that way too after listening to the first again, hate the vocals, but love the guitar like Jer said, guess I'll be making some new lyrics then ;)
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wow, this one is AMAZING! really catchy :)
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