Out of my hea

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Lowsick
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Out of my hea

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So, all my furys go out of my heart
I can't continue anymore ,
all your words hit me ,
the reality surrounds me,
the patience leaves me,


I think it's my last breath,
the vice will kill me ,
my life was full of mistakes
but
I think it's my last breath,
Just remember
remember, who i'm supposed to be.

I fall between the dead,
It's so hard to not give up
My mind is down
My only reason to believe
is you


I think it's my last breath,
the vice will kill me ,
my life was full of mistakes
but
I think it's my last breath,
Just remember
remember, who i'm supposed to be.

Behind my wounds,
I try to be the best,
To show my empty face,
I've been waiting for
The one and only answer to my prayers


I think it's my last breath,
the vice will kill me ,
my life was full of mistakes
but
I think it's my last breath,
Just remember
remember, who i'm supposed to be.


sry for my bad english and +RT for the title :suicide:
Last edited by Lowsick on Thu Apr 07, 2011 7:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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the whole remember to be you thing, and "my last breath" are very crash-ish. and you mentioned "reason to believe," so it's def very sbm-inspired. but not very original... keep woking on it though.
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I know it, but SBM influenced my unconscious, i don't know why...
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We do know why
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I like it, it's nice but sad
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