Paper Stars

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pakiraider
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Paper Stars

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It wasn’t what I intended
I can’t even comprehend it
I let the feeling get the best of me
Back to square one

It’s a harsh reality
When the truth comes out in front of me
It’s not what I wanted
It’s not how this story should unfold

It’s hard to breathe
When you’re around I’m suffocating
Cause you take my breath away
Every single day
Girl, you could be a wreck
You’re my picture perfect mess
And you’re beautiful to me

But it’s a one way road
Can’t have it all, it’s taking its toll
In my brain, I’m going insane
But my head’s higher than the planes and paper stars

Come with me to an escape
And imaginary place for you and I
We can run with reckless abandon
And we can be higher than the planes and paper stars

It’s hard to breathe
When you’re around I’m suffocating
Cause you take my breath away
Every single day
Girl, you could be a wreck
You’re my picture perfect mess
And you’re beautiful to me

I wish it wasn’t reality
I wish you could see this side of me
I wish it was just you and me
I wish on these paper stars
That you’d stand hand in hand next to me

Why couldn’t this be a bad dream
Shake me, save me, wake me up from this nightmare
With you around it’s getting harder to breathe
And all I can do is stand and stare
Knowing that your head’s in the clouds for someone else

I just want you to know
It’s hard to breathe
When you’re around I’m suffocating
Cause you take my breath away,
Every single day, baby it’s not a joke
Girl, you could be a wreck
You’re my picture perfect mess
You’ll always be beautiful to me

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Re: Paper Stars

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Wow that´s really good. Amazing I'd say.
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Re: Paper Stars

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I quite like this very much
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Awesome!! Keep it up!!
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This is really good! :D
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thank you everyone =)
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