Stop Waiting

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Stop Waiting

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this is a song about a very good friend of mine. I spent a long time having feelings for her on and off, hoping one day she would come around and we could end up going out. but it's finally clicked with me that it will never happen, so I wrote this song to describe how I feel about her and the situation. also, I had NOOOO intentions of this song's title to sound like a parody of "Still Waiting" lol it was a total accident i swear. anyway, hope you enjoy this...

Intro
My heart has broken once again
Life is such a deceitful friend
It loves to watch me suffer
Never seems to make me stronger
My feelings for you have returned
Time after time I still haven't learned
I open my mouth but no one hears me scream
So I close my eyes and hope that it's only a dream
Why can't I move on from you?
I'm so lost I don't know what to do

Verse 1
I've spent years waiting around
Hoping one day you'll come around
I get anxious when you're gone
Hate wondering what goes on
I don't like to show my jealousy
It reveals my insecurity

Chorus
A twitch in the heart, a break in the eye
The need to stop waiting for you and I
Wanting to be with you day after day
There's only so many words that I can say
I would die from bleeding but I can live with a scar
We're so close, but you're still so far

Verse 2
You've taken from me what I never want back (So close, did we go too far?)
I never dreamt this is how I would react
When we're apart all I wanna be is with you
When we're together all I wanna do is kiss you
I lost what I never had
'Cause I want what I can't have

(Chorus)

Bridge
I'm so tired from the years of running around in circles
Refusing to admit that we live in different worlds
I wouldn't say it was all a big waste of time
All I ever wanted was for you to be mine
I may never get my wish
But I can promise you this
I will never let you go

(Chorus)
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the lyrics are pretty good ... :) this is not the kind of lyrics I like,but this one is okay
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I like it.
Good job
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Nice, I like the chorus.
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Cool!! :2cool4u:
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the intro should have been... "so should i; stop waiting; for this bitch to start dating" lol
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thank you everyone!
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