Lies You Promised

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Lies You Promised

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if you've ever gotten a cold shoulder from an ex, and felt that you didnt deserve it at all, then read this.

Intro
I head out, for a night with my friends
Whenever we're out, the fun never ends
It's exciting for me, everything we do
I was ready to see, everything but you

Verse 1
Why was it so hard to turn around and greet me?
Pretending you don't know me is no way to treat me
So glad I walked right out that door
Didn't think you could be so immature
It's plain to see which of us has more class
If you think I'm wrong then you can kiss my ass

Chorus
You're living in my mind
I thought I left you behind
After I was so naive
You led me to believe
The lies you promised me
And now it's clear to see
Someday

Verse 2
I have nothing left to feel nostalgia
'Cause now I see I'm better off without ya
I forget to forget what I wanna forget
It's hard to remember what I'll never forget
Served my time now I'm free from the chains
In the middle of ashes a small flame remains

(Chorus)

Bridge part 1
I loved you, I love you not
I love you, I loved you not
I love you, I loved you
Do I still love you?

part 2
Do you really want him?
Do you really need him?
Does he even know that you are there?
Does he love you too?
The way that I loved you?
Would you believe that I still care?

(Chorus)
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:suicide:
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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Bravo
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thanks finglemaster
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thats really good.. kind of sad i guess; but good
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really really really good
hits me, but really good. i completely relate to it



again, really really good!

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thank you!
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