Slight feeling of discontent,
Itching of my palms
I close my eyes halfway,
Nothing matters anyway
mhmm
And despite the poor ventilation,
I breath freely.
And despite my cluttered mind,
I think clearly.
I feel fine.
I'm in the place I call home,
I'm in my comfort zone
And you can't touch me,
Nothing can touch me,
I feel fine.
Don't you worry about me,
Someday you will see,
that I'm not going down that easily,
I'll always be fine.
When you see the world like me,
See it how I want it to be,
We'll be fine.
Song for the Delusional
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Re: Song for the Delusional
LOVE IT! You can describe the situation really well!
I don't really understand the song's rhythm though, like how it might go if someone sang it.
I don't really understand the song's rhythm though, like how it might go if someone sang it.
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Re: Song for the Delusional
listen to moar mountain goats and rhythm will be no problem
and thank you
and thank you
Re: Song for the Delusional
it sounds good, i agree with above, dunno how the rhythm goes, but sound cool!
my fave part is :
And despite the poor ventilation,
I breath freely.
And despite my cluttered mind,
I think clearly.
they are good lyrics :) well done!
my fave part is :
And despite the poor ventilation,
I breath freely.
And despite my cluttered mind,
I think clearly.
they are good lyrics :) well done!
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Re: Song for the Delusional
Wow I really like it! That is amazingly good, and I'm not just saying that. It made me feel kinda refreshed if that makes sense lol. Really awesome!
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