In the works

[Kelbunk]

So i have a couple songs i'm writing write now, i have the rough draft of one done, and just a random chunk of another. I really enjoyed the random chunk and decided to post it haha.

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EDIT- I finished the first song...it kinda reminds me of WWVII by sum 41. Definately a heavier song..hope you enjoy.


-The Unmistakable Scent of Burnt Flesh-

Every day, the world's spinning down
Like a plane with both engines blown
People molesting babies! (What the Fuck!)
Fatal diseases moving through our bones
The human race, as weak as we've ever been
There's no wind in our sails
Seems impossible to save us all
I think that we have failed!

So consider it done, we'll see to your demise
Heart ripped out your chest, blood flowing from your eyes
Not the rich or the poor, politicians or whores,
Nobody will survive
They'll be rattled with fear, no time to even cry,
When this angel of death arrives

We're all dying, we're all in pain
Is there anybody left who's sane?
It's time for everyone to shut up now,
There's one solution, listen well
Wipe everyone out now! (Stop the pain!)
Let's try this again in hell!

So consider it done, we'll see to your demise
Heart ripped out your chest, blood flowing from your eyes
Not the rich or the poor, politicians or whores,
Nobody will survive
They'll be rattled with fear, no time to even cry,
When this angel of death arrives
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I'll get both songs done and post them here someday :P

[Tyler41]

sounds rad

[Kelbunk]

sounds rad

thanks man.
and ive found someone else who says rad :P

[ReemFTW]

Love it!
Reminds me of the French Revolution for some reason...

[Shiv]

Love it!
Reminds me of the French Revolution for some reason...

reminds me of house.....

nice lyrics tho

[Kelbunk]

thank you or the reviews, i will have it done either today or tomorrow unless i get lazy. by the end of the week for sure

[Kelbunk]

k..i dunno if anybody even cares lol. but i've finished the second one too...it's about..teenaged depression and whatnot...

-Shanked by Angst-

So since when did crying make you a pussy?
It doesn't matter, they'll never see the tear stains on your pillowcase.
They'll only see the show of bravado playing on your face
Keep on smiling all day, until you're home in bed
can barely sleep at night, negative thoughts dancing in your head

So I swear to you I'll never cut myself again
But I am good at coming up with other creative ways
To cause self harm
So i don't need a knife going down my arm

"Take that gun out of your mouth, don't do this..."
She says that, but doesn't even look close to crying
"Take that knife away from your wrist, don't do this, i need you..."
Well sweetheart, it's a shame you're not very good at lying

So I swear to you I'll never cut myself again
But I am good at coming up with other creative ways
To cause self harm
So i don't need a knife going down my arm
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and that is...that

[ReemFTW]

Oh I didn't see that you finished the first one! It's awesome!!

I like the second one, but it's a bit emo...? Whatever, that was kindof the point of the song. I mean that the dude's cutting himself and stuff.
I still think you're awesome at picking the right way to say a sentence or however you call it.

[Kelbunk]

Oh I didn't see that you finished the first one! It's awesome!!

I like the second one, but it's a bit emo...? Whatever, that was kindof the point of the song. I mean that the dude's cutting himself and stuff.
I still think you're awesome at picking the right way to say a sentence or however you call it.

ya i wasn't even in that bad of mood when i wrote it. i've been feeling more decent lately haha
but i'm glad you enjoy them, i appreciate the reviews

[Hentaiman]

Nice songs, man. The first one sounds like this epic heavy metal song.

[Kelbunk]

Nice songs, man. The first one sounds like this epic heavy metal song.

lol thanks.
with any luck, someday it will be