Get Out of My Life

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Get Out of My Life

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This is a song I wrote about my idiot-dad who thinks he's always right, but almost never is.

Get Out of My Life

You think it’s really worth it, you think it’s all a game.
Well, I might not be perfect, but at least I’m not insane.
You think you’re really helping, you haven’t helped a bit.
I always try to tell you, but you never seem to give a shit.

Get out of my life, and I’ll stay out of yours.
The only thing I don’t know is what I stay here for.
You’ve never fucking helped me, get it through your mind
If you really have one. I’m leaving you behind.

You think you’re not annoying; you think you’re really smart.
You seemed to be enjoying all this bullshit from the start.
You think you’re so superior to everybody else.
It’s your insuperiority that makes me want to kill myself.

Get out of my life, and I’ll stay out of yours.
The only thing I don’t know is what I stay here for.
You’ve never fucking helped me, get it through your mind
If you really have one. I’m leaving you behind.

I hear you say all the time
That I’m so far out of line.
Have you stopped to take a look upon yourself?
You’re a bitch, not a sign.
You can’t get it through your mind
That you’re not always right about everybody else.

Now I know I was right.
This time, you’re losing the fight.
And to think I used to listen to you.
You’re an ass, not a saint.
Here’s my one final complaint:
I know you didn’t understand this message.
To make it short: FUCK YOU!

Get out of my life, and I’ll stay out of yours.
The only thing I don’t know is what I stay here for.
You’ve never fucking helped me, get it through your mind
If you really have one. I’m leaving you behind.

Get out of my life, and I’ll stay out of yours.
The only thing I don’t know is what I stay here for.
You’ve never fucking helped me, get it through your mind
If you really have one. I’m leaving you behind.
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Really nice! :D
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Thanks, man!
I don't really like it, but it's one of those songs that you write because of what it means to you, rather than what it sounds like.
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^

Yeah, I know the feeling. Sometimes I don't feel my songs are really good or something but Its just what I felt and I had to write about it.
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Ericuda wrote:Thanks, man!
I don't really like it, but it's one of those songs that you write because of what it means to you, rather than what it sounds like.
ya ino watcha mean, but i thinks its pretty good anyway
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pretty frekain beast, i like the fuck you part
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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Haha, thanks guys!
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great talent of writing. :2cool4u:
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Haha, thanks. XD
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