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We dont need this

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We don’t need this -

Verse 1 –
I was so young my future seemed right, (Woah-oh)
Now this fires burning like my life,
Just when I had it all planned, (woah-oh)
It turns the knife like a war in command,
This is where you stab me in the back,
Now I think I’m tired of your crap,

Chorus –
We don’t need this, (we don’t need this),
What happened to an authority?
We don’t need this, (we don’t need this),
what went wrong with society?


Verse 2 –
I thought we were more or less friends,
Well at least stop trying to pretend,
I look for an answer, a reason why,
Now all you do is try to deny,
Those words you said are still haunting me,
Like a photographic memory,

Chorus –
We don’t need this, (we don’t need this),
What happened to an authority?
We don’t need this, (we don’t need this),
what went wrong with society?

Verse 3/Outro –
Don’t apologize, what’s done is done,
I cant forgive what you’ve become,
Was it my fault I didn’t realize,
That someone showing in your eyes,
This is where you stab me in the back,
Now I’m too tired for your crap,


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The Offspring?

lol I like it
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its a bit of a greenday/offspring influence
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very good i thought
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thanks
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i like it
i sang it like
the kids aren't alright lol
exnay on the hombre
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Really nice one , dude, well done!
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really good
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king of jesters wrote: i sang it like
the kids aren't alright lol
especially the first line. really good job
you have far too much time on your hands

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