A.C.D.H.I.

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A.C.D.H.I.

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i took every emotion i've felt toward my ex-gf and put it into this song. Anger/Anxiety, Confusion, Depression, Happiness, Isolation. hope you like it...

Verse 1
With my arms around you, you're resting on me
I never thought I could feel this happy
My favorite moments are when we're together
Standing under the stars I hold you tight
Watching fireworks go off in the night
I wish those moments would last forever
I never expected superwoman
I could deal with little attention
Suddenly I had trouble breathin'
Worst sight in my eyes, seeing you with other guys
Just a rhyme without a reason

Pre-Chorus
Things aren't always what they appear to be
At least that's how things always appear to me

Chorus
I will not forget you, I do not regret you
Tell me, do you regret me?
I can't help but ask you, 'cause I just do not get you

Verse 2
You ended us to save us, there was nothing that could tame us
It increased all of our decreases
You had my heart in your hand, I told you I understand
But I still had to pick up the pieces
You left me in nothing but ecstasy
So why do I feel all this misery?
Growing weaker from all the time that's passed
Why do I act like your entourage?
As if your some kind of saint or god
Controlled by you with no strings attached

(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)

Verse 3
All the great times we shared, the risky chances we dared
Everything is a lesson learned
I kept waiting on time, no one told me it was a crime
I didn't paly with fire but I still got burned
Things are fine between us now, we're clearly back on solid ground
we tied up all of our loose ends
If you ever feel alone, don't go through it alone
Give me a call 'cause we'll always be friends

(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
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wow dude thats realy good i like it alot
the chorus and pre chorus are great!
good job dude keep it up! :mrgreen:
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Kano wrote:wow dude thats realy good i like it alot
the chorus and pre chorus are great!
good job dude keep it up! :mrgreen:
thank you very much!! :smile:
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thats good. really good
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NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!

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Acoustic Bandit (wiggs1441) wrote:thats good. really good
thank you :]]]
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