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One More Time

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:08 am
by sprinks41
this song is about my best friend and how she's coping with the loss of her mom. it's kinda similar to Dreamless Nightmare (the other one i wrote), only i tried to write this one from her point of view.

"One More Time"

Verse 1
Everyday I wake up and pray it was only a dream
Deep down inside me I feel a silent scream
I see a picture of us and I start to cry
Not a day will go by that I won't wonder why
Part of me feels too weak to carry on
Part of me can't accept that you're gone

Chorus
I'd give it all to see you one more time
I'd give it all to have you by my side
I'd give it all to hold you one more time
I'd give it all to kill this beast inside

Verse 2
I know my friends won't let me give up like that
But it's hard to move on when I don't know where I'm at
It's one thing to say that life is never fair
But I feel like you were taken from me without a care
It's been hard for anyone to make me smile
But how can I when I'm drowning in denial

Chorus
I'd give it all to see you one more time
I'd give it all to have you by my side
I'd give it all to hold you one more time
I'd give it all to kill this beast inside

Verse 3
What's a family when no one's there for you
No one to help or even care for you
How can tomorrow be today, when I just saw you yesterday
Help please get this burden off of me, it gives me nothing but agony
I can't grow up, not that I don't want to
It's because I'm lost now that I've lost you

Chorus
I'd give it all to see you one more time
I'd give it all to have you by my side
I'd give it all to hold you one more time
I'd give it all to kill this beast inside
I'd give it all to see you one more time (Please tell me I'm dreaming)
I'd give it all to have you by my side (So I can stop screaming)
I'd give it all to hold you one more time (The pain is just too much)
I'd give it all to kill this beast inside (I love you so much)

Re: One More Time

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:51 am
by Tyler41
thats really really good

Re: One More Time

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:03 pm
by wiggs1441
^hells ya

Re: One More Time

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:27 pm
by iemnaiz
yeah! hope you're best friend's alright..

Re: One More Time

Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 1:56 am
by sprinks41
thanks a lot guys i really appreciate that! yea she's doing a lot better thanks :smile:

Re: One More Time

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:52 am
by n4txO!
I like a lot those lyrics, you're pretty good

Re: One More Time

Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 2:11 am
by sprinks41
n4txO! wrote:I like a lot those lyrics, you're pretty good
thank you :lol!:

Re: One More Time

Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 11:49 pm
by Hentaiman
Maybe i'm a little late, but thats freakin' amazing!!!
I hope your friend's okay. Pretty damn good song you got here :wink:

Re: One More Time

Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:02 am
by spider-man
yeah that's great!

Re: One More Time

Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:09 am
by sprinks41
Hentaiman wrote:Maybe i'm a little late, but thats freakin' amazing!!!
I hope your friend's okay. Pretty damn good song you got here :wink:
spider-man wrote:yeah that's great!
thank you both very much. i appreciate it. :smile: :smile: