Memories

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Dan
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Memories

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Whooo for another song!

Ive been trying to get a song out of me for the last two weeks. Its called Island, but i think i'll just let it die. Randomly today, this new one popped into me. I love it when that happens.
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Do you remember the time
when you said that you were happy
and that youd never lie
Cause you meant the world to me
I always hoped
It would always be that way
but somehow you choked
And then you ran away

now your gone
Im feeling lonely
so wrong
Need someone to hold me
Its you,
you and your simple stories
Come save me, im morbidly alone

Do you rembmer the time
We fucked and then watched skins
and we laughed so loud
even though i think its shit
I lied to you
Just to keep you happy
but somehow you choked
And then you ran away

now your gone
Im feeling lonely
so wrong
Need someone to hold me
Its you,
you and your simple stories
Come save me, im morbidly alone

Do you remember the time
We had a trial separation
I'd sit by the phone
waiting for damnation
I missed you so
But we got back together
but somehow you choked
and then you ran away

now your gone
Im feeling lonely
so wrong
Need someone to hold me
Its you,
you and your simple stories
Come save me, im morbidly alone

Bridge

*phone rings, leave answer phone message* Look, im sorry, I didnt know she was related to you. If it mattered that much i'd never have suggested it. How was i supposed to know? Im not allowed to talk to anyone you know as it is. But bloody hell, I would. Maybe i shouldnt have said that. Bye.

so your gone
Im not even lonely
not wrong
Only I can hold me
not you,
you and your dreadful lying
Dont save me, im better off alone
Im better off alone
Im better off alone
Im better off alone (fade)
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pretty good
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yea I like it. With my rythm it flows pretty good. :geek:
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wiggs1441 wrote:pretty good
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